Bars

[sapphoatsunset]

Title: Bars
Author: beililee
Rating: PG
Pairing: Heechul X Heechul
Disclaimer: Don’t own
Prompt: #10 (46 of 100)
Word Count: 265
Warning: AU. Prisoner!Heechul
A/N: 100 Fic Archive

He was locked away, hidden from the world for life, a number in the system, a huddled body in a cage. Heechul shivered, the prison rags hardly a protection against the cold as he etched his story into the wall, covering up the stories of those long gone.

The system was flawed, but he had someone battling it out in the trenches for him daily. That fact kept him alive, made him continue on when the other inmates beat him, mutilated his beauty, took his ass, tried to own him. It made him fight for survival when corrupt guards took him, beat him, forced drugs upon him, marring the beautifully blank canvas that he was.

He was a number. People were always a number, whether they realized it or not, but it was much more obvious, and much more painful when bars closed around you like you were simply chattel and there was no means of escape. Prisoner number 19673. That was Heechul, his identity long lost to the crime he had committed, or at least was associated with.

They put me here for murdering Shin Min Ah. But it wasn’t I. So much for alibis. How did I get trapped in this tangled web of lies? Plus side? I get to have a 24-7 sex life. But I’m always taking it up the ass.

He was innocent. Jaded. Cold. But he still maintained the quirky humor that everyone was drawn to; it was just more strained, less frequent in its comings. He was Heechul, and as long as he remembered that, they couldn’t win.

Comments

[skittles.livejournal.com]

I really liked this. I've been in the mood for despairing fics lately and this fit exactly what I was looking for. I'd love to see if fleshed out more if you get a chance (or even want to, lawl).

[sapphoatsunset.livejournal.com]

Thank you ^^ It was written in the midst of writing the rl post lol so the mood fit, kinda...

i wanted it to be longer, but i need to get into a philosophical mood first because that's what i want it to become... i think it's time to re-read Brave New World and re-analyze it for fun, just to get me in the frame of mind... idk... maybe i should pic something shorter lol

but, long story short, i MIGHT do something with this... we'll see... I'm trying really hard to improve my writing this summer, so maybe it will become my pet project of something, idk ^^

glad you liked ^^ <3

[crimeis.livejournal.com]

[sapphoatsunset.livejournal.com]

THANK YOU! ^^
I'm glad you liked it... and I am planning to continue it sometime in the future <333

[crimeis.livejournal.com]

[sapphoatsunset.livejournal.com]

aww thank you ♥

[crimeis.livejournal.com]

[sapphoatsunset.livejournal.com]

lol I see your devious ways ^.~

[crimeis.livejournal.com]

*raises both hands* and feign ignorance. is fail at whistling. i don't know what you're talking about. la, la la-la, :DDDD♥~

[sapphoatsunset.livejournal.com]

lololol! ^^ I'm horrid at whistling too! ^^

[sapphoatsunset.livejournal.com]

wow! you were serious! *blushes*

yeah it's okay ^^ that's really sweet of you to do ^^

[crimeis.livejournal.com]

8DDD yes. quotes are serious. they are never, never to be taken lightly. ♥♥~ haha

*huggles* i'm ai by the way!

[sapphoatsunset.livejournal.com]

as you laugh! ^.~ lol

ai like love? like 爱? ^^ I'm bei li (贝莉) or jordyn... whichever lol ^^

[shinelikethesky.livejournal.com]

You have a knack for writing short kinds of awesome don't you? <3

[sapphoatsunset.livejournal.com]

thanks ^^ lol

[crimeis.livejournal.com]

[sapphoatsunset.livejournal.com]

lol that's funny... i don't watch horror flicks though lol ^^

^^

not really. i think you're amusingly sweet ^^ eww... psychology... uni is the pits at times lol ^^ i was lucky to be practically homework-free this evening ^^ yay!!!

aww that's sweet that you care about that ^^ ♥

[sapphoatsunset.livejournal.com]

nope... i watch action, drama, comedy, romance, artsy indie flicks, and more lol but no horror...

you're welcome ^^ lol I SO have you fooled! *innocence!* ^.~ (aww thanks! i'm not really... i just write but it's not spectacular by any means lol ^^) I've already had 3 weeks of it and I have 'midterms' in 2 weeks and projects out the kazoo and AIGOO~! ^^ why??? lol! jk... I like my classes overall

"i promise to be good" but what if i don't want you to be good? after all... a little naughty never hurt anyone! ^.~ jk! fragile? your heart? watch while I laugh ^.~

BUT YES YOU MAY! I've enjoyed our conversation very much! ^^

[sapphoatsunset.livejournal.com]

i actually thought that one was a little ridiculous lol... my favorite movies for crying are the following korean films: A Millionaire's First Love, A Moment to Remember, and Temptation of Wolves ^^

ahhh! coffee... the crazy joys of caffeine and homework! yay!!! ^.~ lol

the way you say my name reminds me of one of my japanese friends lol... it's cute ^^

hi hi hi! ^^

[crimeis.livejournal.com]

[sapphoatsunset.livejournal.com]

no but if you didn't realize that they were sad and depressing, you missed something lol... they all start out relatively happy but by halfway through the torrents of tears have already started their thunderous down-pouring ^.~ lol

*high five!* lol thanks!

I figured you were because of the "kudasai" coupled with your name ^^ aww~ you're adorable! *squishes*

[crimeis.livejournal.com]

[sapphoatsunset.livejournal.com]

yay watching kmovies! ^^

aww thanks ^^ WOOHOO! CONGRATS!!!! ^^ *cuddles*

[crimeis.livejournal.com]

[sapphoatsunset.livejournal.com]

It's okay lol ^^

I went to bed lol so this isn't the swiftest of replies. But you're silly!