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1^st attempt at a fanfic… read at your own risk.

(although… if I was entirely egotistical, I would say that my writing is not half bad lol! if you want more, but not necessarily of a fanfic nature; of a purely smut nature, please let me know. [i.e. i have... would be happy to share...] )

And if you want another chapter [i can always hope, right!?!] then let me know as well

Title: The Great Pretender
Author: beililee
Pairing: Donghae and Rain
Word Count: 833
Rating: R

-----And It Begins-----

There was a sound disturbing his lovely sleep, an annoying sound, nagging, but his mind was in a blur. It took a moment to register. The alarm clock! They were to meet today, and he couldn’t wait; sleep leaving him as a bouncy happiness pervaded his soul. He tossed on clothes, brushed his teeth, and hurriedly rushed out the door, hair still mussed in that I-promise-i-just-rolled-out-of-bed-and-don’t-care-about-it sort of way.

While driving, he listened to the radio, the lyrics of a song getting stuck in his head as he sang along “Rain is coming down from the rooftop… Rain is coming down and it won’t stop…” The lyrics made him giddy, almost like a schoolgirl, so that by the time he reached his destination he could hardly contain himself, in more ways than one. His mind changing ‘it won’t stop’ to ‘he won’t stop’ made the anticipation all the more heightened.

Everyone always pegged him as the innocent and naïve one; if only they knew the fun he had had, the fun he was looking forward to having again. And again, and again. That’s right, he was after a little s-e-x; he needed it in the worst way. Is there anything wrong with that? It seemed like forever since… well, that’s a different story altogether.

He rang the bell, bouncing on his heels as he waited for the door to be answered. The song continued to play through his head, and he started singing it again. Just as he had sung the first word, “Rain…” Rain himself appeared at the door. “I love it when you sing my name, but nothing beats when you scream it. Would you like to come in?” Donghae entered, taking off his shoes and treading after Rain barefoot, in silence.

The silence was too much for his giddy soul however. “…Rain oppa…”

“Yes?”

Donghae looks at him imploringly, begging him with his eyes before whining “please hyung… please!?” Rain chuckled at this, this handsome lad before him begging. “Please what? Oh I see… you are too shy to ask.” Smiling Rain teased “I see. You want me but what do I get out of it?” Playfully being taunted for the first time, it took Donghae a moment to consider and reply with “Wooli dongsaeng, all of him!” smiling, hoping to be cute and funny.

Donghae’s childish behavior always made Rain smile, and although he knew he shouldn’t encourage him, it was difficult to hold the smiles and laughter in. “

“ok”

“really?”

Rain nodded his agreement.

At the motion of assent, Donghae lurched forward, attaching his lips to Rain’s in a passionate kiss. His lips rubbing against Rain’s, he flicked his tongue out to taste as he pulled Rain closer to him. Rain felt something swiftly spiraling out of control, and was awed that such little action from Donghae could illicit such a response in him.

Sounds of heavy breathing filled the air around them as Rain gasped out “slow… slow down! This is going to be entirely to short if you don’t…” Donghae grinned, knowing his power then, and reached down, grabbing Rain’s cock through his pants, rubbing the area as he felt it rise to attention.

“I’m serious Donghae.” Rain tried to glower but the pleasure was too great. Determined not to let it end so soon, he took control of the kiss, grasping Donghae’s head in his hands as he let their tongues mingle, exploring the recesses of Donghae’s mouth.

A moaned breathed out, but neither cared who from, as their pricks rose combatively and yet welcomingly towards each other. Donghae pressed against Rain, yearning for more, but once more Rain mustered the control, stilling Donghae by placing his hands on Donghae’s hips.

“oppa…” donghae pauses, then asks against Rain’s mouth “can I taste your cock please?” Rain gasped, and nearly came right then, as Donghae grinned, knowing he had Rain right where he wanted him. Mutely nodding, Rain could only look on as Donghae pulled down his jeans, and boxers, taking Rain’s cock in his hand and stroking.

His kiss feels like fire, Rain thought, so why does it feel so good. As Donghae’s lips wrapped around Rain’s cock, and he started sucking, Rain’s breathing became more and more shallow, his release drawing near.

“Mmm oppa… you are so yummy!” If Rain hadn’t been trying to hang on to the last shards of his control he would have laughed at that. As it was, all he was cognizant of was the pleasure, and cum he spewed into Donghae’s mouth without warning. He would have felt bad about the lack of warning, almost did, almost apologized, until he looked down and caught Donghae swallowing and licking his lips.

At what would have to be the most inopportune moment, the doorbell sounds. They break apart, haphazardly fixing, or attempting to fix, their clothing as Rain checks to see who has arrived. Donghae pouted as Eeteuk walked into the room. He wasn’t getting any now, or was he?

*note: I hope I spelled all of the Romanized Korean correctly!