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sapphoatsunsetTitle: Pretender Unveiled (sequel to The Great Pretender)
Author: beililee
Pairing: Donghae x Rain x Teuk (actually… rain almost becomes no existent now lol… ALMOST ^^)
Rating: R
Word Count: 1077
Warnings: THREESOME... language ^^
Eeteuk had long suspected that there was something beneath the exterior of the adorable and quote-unquote innocent Lee Donghae. Thus, when the latter rushed out the door this morning, much earlier than his usual noon-one-two wake-up time, in such a harried and hurried manner, Teuk pounced on the chance to discreetly follow and discover the truth.
Since Teuk is not naturally stealthy it was a very good thing that Donghae was so absorbed in his head bobbing and chortling along with the radio to notice the familiar vehicle following his. In fact, even when he pulled up and parked his vehicle behind Donghae’s, he was not noticed.
Donghae went to the door, the door Teuk recognized as Rain’s. An emotion desired to rear its ugly head, but was squelched. I don’t know anything yet; this is not the time for that feeling. If there was anything Teuk hated, it was to feel jealousy, even if it was just faint pangs. It made him feel childish, in a bad way – not the happy way he always strived for to deny his 25 years.
The minutes ticked by as he waited, attempting to be patient, hoping – no, praying – that Donghae would come out soon, soon enough that he could be sure that Rain loved only him. 10 minutes. 15. 20 – enough! Teuk strode to the door with purpose, incessantly ringing the bell until the door flew open, revealing a disheveled Rain to his increasingly jealous eyes.
AS he entered the room, the first thing his eyes lit upon was the supposedly innocent Donghae; the taste of his victorious discovery – victorious because once again Teukie knew all – was terribly bitter in his mouth, like coffee that someone accidentally put soap in. He whirled around to face the older accusingly.
“How could you? I thought… Well obviously I thought fucking wrong! I’m leaving!!!” Teuk attempted to storm out of the house but a hand on his arm stilled him. But only for a moment because it belonged to the wrong person. It didn’t matter that somewhere deep inside, if Teuk was truly honest with himself, he thought that Donghae was attractive. Right now all he wanted was to throw a fit and have Rain comfort him.
Instead, instead of showing that weak side of himself to anyone, even his love, he turned to Donghae, fists raised.
Donghae winced and ducked, preparing for what he now understood was a deserving blow. He may be a closet slut, but he liked to think he had morals. “Hyung…” his voice wavered as he addressed Teuk. “Mianhae~! I didn’t know… you didn’t tell me…” He pouted, even while he felt the guilt for not being forthright either.
A glance up at Teuk’s face proved that he showed no sign of lessening the anger over a little pout. Would the waterworks do the job? Donghae started crying then, for he was willing to be entirely a child if he could get his way.
Through all this Rain went unnoticed, and he was surprised that it was aggravating to not be the center of attention. Thus, he addressed them both. “Guys, there is but a simple solution. You can both have me at the same time; that way neither of you will feel jealous. Is that an amenable plan?” Rain smiled inside at his genius, a perfect plan to be the center of the attention of not one, but two gorgeous men.
Donghae was practically squeaking on the inside, and showed that through the vigorous nodding of his head, while Teuk grudgingly agreed, somewhat curious to taste and experience the former.
“Good.” Rain grinned in excitement. “Then I want to watch the two of you kiss… take it where you like because if you are going to far without me I will intervene.” Rain knew that, although Donghae was the younger, he was more apt to rapidly spur them to release and pleasure, while Teuk would likely want to draw out the experience and savor it. He was not disappointed.
While Teuk looked hesitantly and nervously at his dongsaeng, Donghae leaned forward, creating a brief touching of lips. Teuk continued to be still, as Donghae explored his face, quickly placing butterfly kisses everywhere, his nose, his cheeks, his forehead, everywhere, before reclaiming his mouth in a breathtaking kiss.
Teuk’s first reaction was to gasp, thus leaving the recesses of his mouth vulnerable to attack. A warm tongue snaked into his mouth, exploring, caressing his tongue, as his body was pulled closer to Donghae and he became aware of a certain heat. Forgetting himself, he ground against it in response.
A groan echoed through the room, then another, and yet another as the two men made out heavily in front of the third, the third stroking himself to hardness.
Just when Donghae would have taken the pair deeper – Rain saw the path where his hand was headed – he was interrupted. “Teuk. Come Here.” Rain embraced him with a kiss. “You too Donghae.” A kiss awaited him as well. Then. Then. Then.
Thoughts became a blur for them all, as clothes flew in every direction, landing here, there, on a lamp, in front of the tv, by the couch, everywhere. All three sported beautiful erections, and all three desperately needed release.
So much so that when it was Donghae, and not Rain, who mounted Teuk, there was no protest sounded, just pleading moans of lust and desire. No jealousy surface when Rain in turn mounted Donghae. After all, it made sense this way. Teuk was the least aggressive sexily of the three, and was content to receive the thrusts from Donghae along with the echoes of the thrusts from Rain.
They made the cutest Donghae sandwich ever as grunts and moans filled the blank space, the smell of sweat and sex overwhelming. “oh-ooh Rain!” “uh-uhh Teuk!” “mmn-oh Donghae!”
They were nearing release, so close, just on the brink, the youngers clenching the holes around the shafts thrusting deeply within them, as Donghae reached around to grasp the unused cock in his palm. “Your cock is amazing…” he whispered conspiratorially, his breath wafting over Teuk’s ear caressingly. Almost instantaneously, his hand was wet with seed as Teuk tightened up and came. This caused Donghae to follow suit and cause Rain to also spill his seed in the youngest.
They collapsed to the floor, sated, and a whisper was heard. “I’ll forgive you Rain, if it can always be this good…”
-The End-
The Great Pretender
Author: beililee
Pairing: Donghae x Rain x Teuk (actually… rain almost becomes no existent now lol… ALMOST ^^)
Rating: R
Word Count: 1077
Warnings: THREESOME... language ^^
Eeteuk had long suspected that there was something beneath the exterior of the adorable and quote-unquote innocent Lee Donghae. Thus, when the latter rushed out the door this morning, much earlier than his usual noon-one-two wake-up time, in such a harried and hurried manner, Teuk pounced on the chance to discreetly follow and discover the truth.
Since Teuk is not naturally stealthy it was a very good thing that Donghae was so absorbed in his head bobbing and chortling along with the radio to notice the familiar vehicle following his. In fact, even when he pulled up and parked his vehicle behind Donghae’s, he was not noticed.
Donghae went to the door, the door Teuk recognized as Rain’s. An emotion desired to rear its ugly head, but was squelched. I don’t know anything yet; this is not the time for that feeling. If there was anything Teuk hated, it was to feel jealousy, even if it was just faint pangs. It made him feel childish, in a bad way – not the happy way he always strived for to deny his 25 years.
The minutes ticked by as he waited, attempting to be patient, hoping – no, praying – that Donghae would come out soon, soon enough that he could be sure that Rain loved only him. 10 minutes. 15. 20 – enough! Teuk strode to the door with purpose, incessantly ringing the bell until the door flew open, revealing a disheveled Rain to his increasingly jealous eyes.
AS he entered the room, the first thing his eyes lit upon was the supposedly innocent Donghae; the taste of his victorious discovery – victorious because once again Teukie knew all – was terribly bitter in his mouth, like coffee that someone accidentally put soap in. He whirled around to face the older accusingly.
“How could you? I thought… Well obviously I thought fucking wrong! I’m leaving!!!” Teuk attempted to storm out of the house but a hand on his arm stilled him. But only for a moment because it belonged to the wrong person. It didn’t matter that somewhere deep inside, if Teuk was truly honest with himself, he thought that Donghae was attractive. Right now all he wanted was to throw a fit and have Rain comfort him.
Instead, instead of showing that weak side of himself to anyone, even his love, he turned to Donghae, fists raised.
Donghae winced and ducked, preparing for what he now understood was a deserving blow. He may be a closet slut, but he liked to think he had morals. “Hyung…” his voice wavered as he addressed Teuk. “Mianhae~! I didn’t know… you didn’t tell me…” He pouted, even while he felt the guilt for not being forthright either.
A glance up at Teuk’s face proved that he showed no sign of lessening the anger over a little pout. Would the waterworks do the job? Donghae started crying then, for he was willing to be entirely a child if he could get his way.
Through all this Rain went unnoticed, and he was surprised that it was aggravating to not be the center of attention. Thus, he addressed them both. “Guys, there is but a simple solution. You can both have me at the same time; that way neither of you will feel jealous. Is that an amenable plan?” Rain smiled inside at his genius, a perfect plan to be the center of the attention of not one, but two gorgeous men.
Donghae was practically squeaking on the inside, and showed that through the vigorous nodding of his head, while Teuk grudgingly agreed, somewhat curious to taste and experience the former.
“Good.” Rain grinned in excitement. “Then I want to watch the two of you kiss… take it where you like because if you are going to far without me I will intervene.” Rain knew that, although Donghae was the younger, he was more apt to rapidly spur them to release and pleasure, while Teuk would likely want to draw out the experience and savor it. He was not disappointed.
While Teuk looked hesitantly and nervously at his dongsaeng, Donghae leaned forward, creating a brief touching of lips. Teuk continued to be still, as Donghae explored his face, quickly placing butterfly kisses everywhere, his nose, his cheeks, his forehead, everywhere, before reclaiming his mouth in a breathtaking kiss.
Teuk’s first reaction was to gasp, thus leaving the recesses of his mouth vulnerable to attack. A warm tongue snaked into his mouth, exploring, caressing his tongue, as his body was pulled closer to Donghae and he became aware of a certain heat. Forgetting himself, he ground against it in response.
A groan echoed through the room, then another, and yet another as the two men made out heavily in front of the third, the third stroking himself to hardness.
Just when Donghae would have taken the pair deeper – Rain saw the path where his hand was headed – he was interrupted. “Teuk. Come Here.” Rain embraced him with a kiss. “You too Donghae.” A kiss awaited him as well. Then. Then. Then.
Thoughts became a blur for them all, as clothes flew in every direction, landing here, there, on a lamp, in front of the tv, by the couch, everywhere. All three sported beautiful erections, and all three desperately needed release.
So much so that when it was Donghae, and not Rain, who mounted Teuk, there was no protest sounded, just pleading moans of lust and desire. No jealousy surface when Rain in turn mounted Donghae. After all, it made sense this way. Teuk was the least aggressive sexily of the three, and was content to receive the thrusts from Donghae along with the echoes of the thrusts from Rain.
They made the cutest Donghae sandwich ever as grunts and moans filled the blank space, the smell of sweat and sex overwhelming. “oh-ooh Rain!” “uh-uhh Teuk!” “mmn-oh Donghae!”
They were nearing release, so close, just on the brink, the youngers clenching the holes around the shafts thrusting deeply within them, as Donghae reached around to grasp the unused cock in his palm. “Your cock is amazing…” he whispered conspiratorially, his breath wafting over Teuk’s ear caressingly. Almost instantaneously, his hand was wet with seed as Teuk tightened up and came. This caused Donghae to follow suit and cause Rain to also spill his seed in the youngest.
They collapsed to the floor, sated, and a whisper was heard. “I’ll forgive you Rain, if it can always be this good…”
-The End-
The Great Pretender
